Train terror

Here is the video of my performance Train Terror, in this performance, I was working in a group, this group consisted of Rithan, Me, Harang, Nasser, and Adam.To start with I believe that in the performance there are certain points that were done well in the performance, for example, I believe the way we were able to cooperate and  execute this play, I also think that we were able to equally delegate the roles and divide the lines for each of us so each one of us had their own line.I also think that we were able to perform our play in  a very creative and descriptive way and I also believe that we used our melodramatic skills by making our voice very loud to try and make it like our character , I also think that we used some actions and also a little melodramatic movements to emphasize our character's personality and so we could try and step into our own character's shoes.Overall I believe that our whole group did a very good job in performing the play and working collaboratively together to prepare the play.However, even though I think we have put a very good effort we could have improved this performance through certain points that we could have worked on.Things I believe we could have done was maybe we could have made our performance a little more melodramatic by adding more melodramatic actions and movements to emphasize how melodramatic  the performance is.Other than that even though we managed to use some space during our performance but I also think we could have been more spacious while performing.Lastly what I think we could have improved was maybe we could have done a better job in ending our scene as it did not really have a proper ending that could show the audience that the scene has ended also so we would not have to tell the audience ourselves.Other than that another thing that could have enhanced our scene was if maybe we had some props or costumes.For example, for the costumes and the props,  I believe that I think for the villain I could have used a black scarf and a black top hat as that could have partially represented my character and that I think I could have improved my melodramatic movements using the scarf as it could have enhanced my movements.Also, for the sidekicks they could have used a costume to highlight their character and to emphasize their character during the scene, for the hero, I think he could have used a cape or a mask so that his character as a hero could be very well expressed in the scene.Lastly for general props I believe we could have used ropes to make the scene a little more realistic as the damsel is tied by a rope so with the real rope it could be much more realistic, also at the end the villain and his sidekick are tied with a rope so that part of the scene could also become much more lifelike.To conclude I believe that me and my time had out an excellent amount of overall effort in the scene and I tink that we have performed it very well and we worked collaboratively very well but for next time we could have improved it through certain points like improving our melodramatic skills so that we can make the scene even better, also to enhance it as much as we can instead of just surpass it by using the improvements but also maybe we can enhance by using additional props and costumes to enhance to the best we can.